Gaelavin's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Link: The Story]

Your on the right way

Your on the right way, but you should put more effort in it. Not that I say you did it in 2 seconds, but don't expect to do an amazing flash in one session. Next time, make a part, save your work, sleep, continue, save your work, sleep, continue, and etc. until you get an amazing movie!!! But as I say, your on the right track, on some part in this movie made me laugh (in a good way). I can't wait to see your next, improved flash movie!!

[P-ants]

Not BAD, but could've been better

Your graphics weren't exceptionnal, although I could they were good enough. The main thing I think will make this movie unable to pass is that it doesn't have much point. Next time, try to make it have an understandable story, or at least more funny. But don's be discouraged, keep trying, your almost there.